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Today we started to innovate the model text 'The Caravan'. Use the boxed up planning grid below to begin to plan the innovated version of the text. We've chosen the title 'The House'. Look at what happens in the original text and think what could happen in our new version.
Boxed-up Planning Grid
Innovation phase
The Caravan |
Key details |
The House
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· Abdul warned by Dad not to play up by the pylon · They don’t listen – go after school · Find empty caravan (sentence of 3: inside, wheels and windows) |
Opening · Two MCs warned not to do something |
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· One afternoon a storm raged – weather described (rain, thunder,
lightning) · Lightning strikes the pylon · Pylon crashes onto caravan roof |
Build-up ·
MCs set off despite of warning |
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· Roof crumples – electricity prickles the air and rain lashes
through roof · Abdul and Izzie think it’s the end · Start to escape |
Dilemma ·
Something goes wrong ·
They are in deep trouble |
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· They escape · Izzie starts to laugh with relief and Abdul joins in · Run to Muggie Moss Road
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Resolution ·
MCs escape |
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· They tell Dad · Dad is furious · They reflect on what happened
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Ending · MCs get told off · MCs reflect |
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